My brain is completely scrambled at the moment. I have gone through 100 pages of story just fixing errors not actually adding any color yet. This is phase one, get the errors out of the way and then go through and re-read the entire thing and add some of the fluff/color to the story that I never really went into. Just descriptors really— i mean i have them in the story just it could use a lot more.
You know, I had a lot more I was going to talk about here but honestly my eyes are bugging out. taking a break.
-Jerr
Jerry's Adventures 
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